Done

That's it. All chapters posted. I've also turned on the comments so you are welcome to leave whatever messages you want about the manuscript. Even anonymously if you are so inclined. Please let me know what you think: either chapter by chapter or just at the end or in an email. ANY and all feedback is appreciated! You are also welcome to send anybody to the story. I have tried to set it up so that the chapters can be easily accessed with the sidebar archives arranged from oldest to newest.